Bad Reviews: What’s a Novice Author To Do?

Hooray! I thought all the book reviews were done some time ago, but one more appeared in the December 2006 edition of the Literary Review of Canada.

Boo! Not only is the review (not available online) almost entirely negative, but it also misrepresents the book entirely. I don’t mind the negative, but the misunderstanding and misrepresenting pisses me off something terrible.

I have a response forthcoming in the January/February 2007 edition, in which I do what you are supposed to do and take the high road. It seems to be common wisdom that it is Not The Done Thing to argue with reviewers, although Peter Woit does it all the time (that is, argues with reviews of his string theory book Not Even Wrong) regularly in his blog, and it comes over OK.

So should I post what I really think here on this little corner of the Internet or not? Do I descend into the gutter, biting and scratching and swearing and generally lowering the tone of the neighbourhood, or do I stay up here, tight-lipped and dignified on the lofty high ground, breathing the etherial air that we morally pure people breathe.

What’s the right thing for a novice author to do?

Technology Makes You Stupid

Labour saving devices save you physical effort, so unless you deliberately do something about it, labour saving devices cut down your physical exercise and make you unfit.

New research (via Slashdot and the Independent) shows that brain-saving devices cut down your brain exercise and make you stupid.

On the bright side, the research also shows that those who share my laziness are not condemned to remain stupid, because our brain can still develop.

Satellite navigation systems can stunt your brain, preventing it from developing, according to scientists. They have discovered that taxi drivers have actually grown more brain cells because of all the knowledge they keep in their heads.

When the scientists compared the brains of taxi drivers with those of other drivers, they found the cabbies had more grey matter in the area of the brain associated with memory.

They believe that this part of the brain, the mid-posterior hippocampus, is where black-cab drivers store a mental map of London, including up to 25,000 street names and the location of all the major tourist attractions.

The research is the first to show that the brains of adults can grow in response to specialist use. It has been known that areas of children’s brains can grow when they learn music or a language.

Link: Independent Online Edition > Health Medical.

Popularity Rises With Price

Here’s why people who say that the unemployed should offer to work for less are wrong. It’s actually about tuition fees, but it’s a reminder that price can act as a signal of quality. What’s a little odd is that the price seems to be taken as a signal of quality even though the university itself did not change – that is, there is no guarantee that students who pay the full fees get what they are paying for.

John Strassburger, the president of Ursinus College, a small liberal
arts institution here in the eastern Pennsylvania countryside, vividly
remembers the day that the chairman of the board of trustees told him
the college was losing applicants because of its tuition.

 

At Ursinus College officials determined that tuition was too low to
draw enough students. So they raised it, and applications surged.

It was too low.

So
early in 2000 the board voted to raise tuition and fees 17.6 percent,
to $23,460 (and to include a laptop for every incoming student to help
soften the blow). Then it waited to see what would happen.

Ursinus
received nearly 200 more applications than the year before. Within four
years the size of the freshman class had risen 35 percent, to 454
students. Applicants had apparently concluded that if the college cost
more, it must be better.

“It’s bizarre and it’s embarrassing, but it’s probably true,” Dr. Strassburger said.

Ursinus
also did something more: it raised student aid by nearly 20 percent, to
just under $12.9 million, meaning that a majority of its students paid
less than half price.

Ursinus is not unique. With the race for rankings and choice students shaping college pricing, the University of Notre Dame, Bryn Mawr College, Rice University,
the University of Richmond and Hendrix College, in Conway, Ark., are
just a few that have sharply increased tuition to match colleges they
consider their rivals, while also providing more financial assistance.

The
recognition that families associate price with quality, and that a
tuition rise, accompanied by discounts, can lure more applicants and
revenue, has helped produce an economy in academe something like that
in the health care system, with prices rising faster than inflation but
with many consumers paying less than full price…

More at the New York Times, below.

Link: In Tuition Game, Popularity Rises With Price – New York Times.

Bureaucracy: it ain’t just the government

A glimpse inside the world of that old efficient, lean and mean, innovative private industry, Microsoft style, from someone who spent a year working on the shutdown menu.

The scary thing about the story is that you can imagine how it happens, one step at a time, with a good reason for each step. This is not a "what’s wrong with Microsoft" story, this is a "what happens in big organizations" story. Read and weep.

Link: moblog: The Windows Shutdown crapfest.

So just on my team, these are the people who came to every single planning meeting about this feature [the shutdown menu]:

  • 1 program manager
  • 1 developer
  • 1 developer lead
  • 2 testers
  • 1 test lead
  • 1 UI designer
  • 1 user experience expert
  • 8 people total
  • These planning meetings happened every week, for the entire year I worked on Windows.
    In addition to the above, we had dependencies on the shell team (the guys who wrote, designed and tested the rest of the Start menu), and on the kernel team (who promised to deliver functionality to make our shutdown UI as clean and simple as we wanted it). The relevant part of the shell team was about the same size as our team, as was the relevant part of kernel team.
    So that nets us a conservative estimate of 24 people involved in this feature. Also each team of 8 was separated by 6 layers of management from the leads, so let’s add them in too, giving us 24   (6 * 3) – 1 (the shared manager) 41 total people with a voice in this feature. Twenty-four of them were connected sorta closely to the code, and of those twenty four there were exactly zero with final say in how the feature worked. Somewhere in those other 17 was somebody who did have final say but who that was I have no idea since when I left the team — after a year — there was still no decision about exactly how this feature would work.

    By the way "feature" is much too strong a word; a better description would be "menu". Really. By the time I left the team the total code that I’d written for this "feature" was a couple hundred lines, tops.

    Update. The original post was down for a while, leading to a flurry of readers coming here instead, but is now back up. Any Joel readers who end up here anyway may want to read what I have to say about the question of choice in software. Or not, of course.

    Best Seller!

    Not quite the New York Times best seller list, but I am on the nearly-as-important Words Worth Books best seller list, appearing at number 5 on their paperback nonfiction list (ahead of Al Gore’s Inconvenient Truth but behind Stephen Lewis, Jane Jacobs and "Waterloo Trails and Bikeways").

    Paperback Non Fiction

    212 – Race Against Time 2/E – Stephen Lewis
    116 – Waterloo Trails & Bikeways
    87 – Fantastic Realities – Frank Wilczek
    80 – Dark Age Ahead – Jane Jacobs
    63 – No One Makes You Shop at Wal-Mart – Tom Slee
    61 – Inconvenient Truth – Al Gore
    61 – End of Food – Thomas Pawlick
    50 – Guidebook to Woolwich Trails – Trails Group
    49 – Manitoulin Rocks – Peter Russell
    45 – Temperament – Stuart Isacoff
    42 – Sophie’s World – Jostein Gaarder

    I know that part of the reason is that the staff has been helping to sell the book (Dave, this means you), so many thanks to Words Worth Books for their support of No One Makes You Shop At Wal-Mart.

    Link: Best Sellers.

    Also see the Words Worth blog, called (I have no idea why) How To Furnish a Room.

    On Doing My Homework

    The Story So Far

    Anthony Evans and I, as well as the Dorset Dipper,
    got into a bit of argy-bargy in the comments following Chris Dillow’s
    review of No One Makes You Shop At Wal-Mart. The story so far is this:
    Chris Complained
    that I didn’t address Hayek’s argument "that markets are a way of
    processing countless dispersed pieces of information on people’s tastes
    and technologies."
    I Indicated
    that "I’ve never read much of [Hayek]. The bits I have always seemed to
    be talking about a reality I didn’t recognize. So I can’t really
    address the point, and will go and read. Mea culpa." 
    Anthony Asserted
    that "To write a book on the subject of individualism and free markets
    without reading Hayek is shocking", and on that basis he wouldn’t read
    my book and I’m poorer by $2.
    Now Anthony has followed up with a full-length post of his own, arguing — well, a whole bunch of things actually, which I am going to argue back at in…

    This weeks episode.

    Anthony says:

    The focus of his book is individualism and competition, and you can’t understand either without knowing about Hayek’s Individualism and Economics Order, and The Use of Knowledge in Society.

    Or, as he now puts it "you should read up on a topic if you’re writing a book on it"
     

    I think this little dispute has its roots in the difference between an education in
    the natural sciences and one in the social sciences. No one ever asked
    me if I had "read Heisenberg" or "read Pauling" or even "read
    Einstein". It’s just not a question that makes sense. Their discoveries
    get absorbed into the subject; new terminology arises around their
    work; new ways of expressing their insights are formulated. Pretty
    quickly reading the original is redundant, and is something you do for
    historical interest alone. Mathematics, of course, takes this tendency
    to the extreme, consciously purging every ounce of historical context
    from its theorems as it moves forward in the search for stark elegance.
    So the idea that you need to "read Hayek" or "read Marx" or "read
    Weber" is really a bit odd. The insights they had have either faded or
    become part of the discipline — or at least, in the more fractious
    world of economics, one strand of it. So yes, I’ve "read Friedman", and
    yes I’ve "read Becker" and so on. And I’ve even read a bit of Hayek (I
    did just say I haven’t read much).
    But really, unless you are interested in the historical context of the
    arguments at the time — the whole Lange-Lerner market socialism thing
    for example, or where Margaret Thatcher got her inspiration — I should
    not have missed a lot if economics as a discipline has done its job,
    and I trust it has.
    So I did go and read the essay on Knowledge in Society,
    about the price system and how it captures and coordinates specialized
    local knowledge and expertise, and why central planning is doomed to
    fail. Fine. These are arguments that have indeed become part of the
    mainstream of economics and yes, for the record, I’m familiar with
    them. But let’s face it, a lot has become understood since 1945 when he
    wrote this essay.
    One reason I dislike Hayek’s writing in this essay, from a personal
    point of view, is its consciously broad-brush approach. This is what I
    meant when I said "The bits
    I have [read] always seemed to be talking about a reality I didn’t recognize."
    Journalists know there are two ways to tell a story: from the particular to
    the general and from the general to the particular. Hayek starts big (look at that
    title "The Use of Knowledge in Society"). Myself, I like to start small
    and specific (which is why I called my book after an everyday happening
    like shopping). When the devil is in the details, the "think big"
    approach is likely to miss important things, and I think this is a
    lesson that most economists have learned since Hayek.
    George Akerlof, for example, wrote in his Nobel lecture that "In the
    late 1960s there was a shift in the job description of economic
    theorists… Since that time, both micro and macroeconomics have
    developed a Scarry-ful book of models designed to incorporate into
    economic theory a whole variety of realistic behaviors." To read Hayek
    now is to read an essay that overreaches. It does not tell me what
    happens in any one situation. Stiglitz gets it right when he says that
    assuming away market failures is like leaving Hamlet out of the play.
    Anthony disagrees I’m sure, and we are left with what Dipper described as "my assumptions against your assumptions".
    To sum up, there is nothing in what I wrote that I would change having
    read this essay. It is true that I don’t talk directly in the book
    about the role of markets as a mechanism for processing information and
    social knowledge, but hey, it’s only 240 pages, you can’t write about
    everything.

    Anthony says:

    It’s ludicrous [for me] to say that a cover-to-cover reading of the book is a pre-requisite for any opinion to be formed.
     

    Just for the record, what I actually wrote was

    Well, I might say that dismissing a book without reading any of it is shocking too, if I hadn’t done it so many times myself.

    So relax, we all have to choose what we pay attention to and what we
    don’t. Go ahead, have opinions, I know I do.

    But I still think it’s a
    bit cheeky to accuse me of not doing my homework on the basis of what I
    wrote about not reading much Hayek.

    What about those toilets?

    Anthony says I don’t know much about toilets.

    Well, I’m not going to work too hard to defend a blog post. There are
    indeed inconsistencies there – fair enough. But I actually don’t think
    the biggest cause of water-wasting toilets is flat-rate water payment
    (which has, I think, receded anyway over the years). The costs of
    information are at least as significant. Quick, what portion of your
    water bill is from toilet flushes? So I stand by my basic argument that
    in this case neither state nor market succeeded until our individual
    hero came along and solved the problem.

    So that’s it for now. Thanks to Anthony for letting me know about his post and for the free publicity to his readers.